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Will Antilles

Short Stories
- The Freezer
- Character
- Perpetual Knight
- Sickness

The Freezer (12 ratings)
         by Will Antilles
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YOU GASP, CATCHING YOUR BREATH AS YOUR LUNGS FILL WITH AIR FOR THE FIRST TIME IN A LONG WHILE. YOU SCREAM AS THE RINGING YOUR HEAD CUTS THROUGH LIKE A KNIFE. AS YOUR SCREAM SUBSIDES YOU REALIZE THAT A SOUND WAS NOT MADE. BEADS OF WATER DROP ON YOUR ARM YOU THINK RAIN, NOT SWEAT, YOUR OWN SWEAT. NO RESPONSE, ARMS ARE HEAVY, VERY HEAVY, IT AGITATES YOU. AS THE SWEAT BUILDS, IT BECOMES INTOLERABLE, MADDENING. THEN IT HITS YOU, A SENSATION YOU HAVE NOT FELT SINCE YOU COULD REMEMBER. YOUR BODY QUIVERS, SHAKES, CONVULSES AND ALL CONTROL IS LOST. WHAT COULD IT BE? NO, BODILY FUNCTION, ARE OUT OF CONTROL, HOW EMBARRISING. DID ANYONE SEE? YOU TRY TO FOCUS, BUT THE EYES, YOUR EYES ARE NOT ACCUSTOM TO LIGHT. A MISTAKE, IN TRYING TO STAND YOU FIND YOURSELF WADDLING ON THE FLOOR IN YOUR OWN SALIVA. WAIT, THIS SEEMS ODD, THE FLOOR IS HARD AND COLD AS IF IT WERE MADE OUT OF METAL. PICKING YOURSELF AS BEST AS YOU COULD, YOU TRY TO FAMILIARIZE YOURSELF WITH YOUR SURROUNDINGS. THIS COLD, DARK, UNNATURAL PLACE IS NOT YOUR HOME. WHERE ARE YOU? HOW DID YOU GET THERE? THEN IT HAPPENS, REALITY HITS HOME, YOU ARE NOT ANYWHERE YOU ARE IN THE F R E E Z E R !!!!!!!!!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO...... ...THUMP!!!!!!!!


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