Either This Or Upon This by Norman Caruso
Page 2 of 2 Some men were running away, back to our trenches. Yet we still pushed on. An
artillery shell exploded a few feet in front of us, and we felt it the perfect
time to charge through. Shrouded by dust and smoke, we charged in, until we
fell into a large pit. It was the German trench.
Al fired at a German charging us, and continued down the trench to the
machine gunners. I followed behind him, covering his back as we moved on. More
Americans were pouring in, but were going down the opposite line of the trench.
Al and I were so close to the machine gunners, we could see the tops of their
helmets. Al finally got in range, picked off one, and I picked off the other.
We went to the machine gunners position, and gave the signal to advance. We
heard sort of a loud cheer across the battlefield. I looked out across the
trench, and saw a gleaming aura around our own trench. It confused me at first,
but then Al shook me to get going.
"Come on! I think we did it!" Al yelled. We ran down the trench toward our
comrades. Just then 2 Germans peeked out of the underground trench section.
Quick to spot us, the first German shot Al right in the head. Al fell, silent.
I quickly responded by killing the German. A second German then appeared, his
rifle drawn, my rifle drawn. We just sort of looked at each other. I looked
into his eyes, and saw innocence deep inside. And then I looked below, at his
shirt, which was unbuttoned at the top. There, I saw a locket, which shined
beautifully in the sun. I smiled, and put my gun down. The German wasted no
time, and shot me in the chest, right through my heart. I fell on the ground,
clutching my locket, and saw her face in front of me. She simply was walking
away, to a light I could not reach. I screamed, but she would not respond, and
then there was silence.
They found my body in the trench after the fight was over. They inspected my
body, taking any notes or ammo I might acquire. They then noticed I was
clutching something in my hands, with a firm grasp. They pried open my fingers
to find a locket, a shiny silver locket, which gleamed beautifully in the sun.
I promised to return to her with it.
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