The Mysterious planet (5 ratings) by Alexander Castle
Page 1 of 1 The big red ship with the purple fins came down with a mighty thump. A door
on the side of the ship opened up and out stepped three humans. Two females and
one male.
The first female was the ship captain. She was Captain Andrea Willows. The
other two were Lieutenant Starker and General Brutus.
They had been sent from their home planet to inhabit this planet because the
previous race (named the Transiquils) had died out hundreds of years ago on
this planet.
The planet was very good for the conditions that the crew required to send
the world of which they came that this planet was okay for the rest of there
race to populate.
A lush jungle with all flowers surrounded the planet (or the part of the
planet they had landed on) is where they where.
There were no forms of life anywhere to be seen (except the plants) The most
intriguing thing about the planet was that there was o reason to show why the
Transiquils had died out.
"Well Captain, who said that landing on this planet would be a hideous
task?" said Starker
"Yes, but I think that there is something wrong" said Andrea.
"What did the previous owners of this planet look like Brutus?"
Brutus reached into his pocket and picked out a picture, on it was a huge
monster with a tail, purple skin and a huge mouthful of teeth.
"It looks like a-," said Andrea
"Lizard" interrupted Brutus
"A terrible Lizard" said Andrea
"Dinosaur" said Starker
"What do you mean ‘Dinosaur?’" said Brutus
"That is what terrible lizard is in our ancient elder language" said
Starker
"Hey, anyway what did the Transiquils name this lump of dirt?" asked
Brutus
"Earth" replied Andrea.
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