Pictureworld (21 ratings) by Umesha Chalanie
Page 1 of 1 The air around him started to thicken, weighed down by the thousands of
golden particles that shimmered in the light. Soft, mellow music started to
play
from faraway, the gentle rhythm pulsing through his veins. A subtle aroma found
its way to his nostrils, and his body tingled with anticipating wonder.
The spell had worked
The world around him started to change, mixing and blending with another.
Gone was the comforting familiarity of his bedroom, and in its place stood a
scene he had looked on many times, but never actually seen...
A stone-dark castle towered on a grassy moor, impressive and elegant despite
its obvious age and dilapidation. Surrounding the castle for miles around were
tents, modest ones and lavish ones, all teeming with crowds of people.
He switched the small egg-timer to his left hand, careful not to disturb its
workings, lest he cut his visit to this world short. Careful not to attract any
attention, he made his way forward into the crowd, listening to snippets of
conversation on the way.
"...maybe we’ll be safe, bein’ so close to his castle an’ all..."
"...stupid girl, that Princess. I tell ya, he could’ve chosen Lord Derek’s
daughter - much prettier face, she has..."
"...no stoppin’ him now. Poof, and he’ll end the world..."
Slowly, making his past the castle, he began to smell something. Something
other than the combined sweat of hundreds of people - something stronger, not
as
pungent but filled with danger. His ears pricked up as he heard a slow,
crackling sound, and he turned around to look at the castle.
"The castle! It’s on fire!"
And so it was true. The flames rose, quickly enveloping the building, and
the
thick, black smoke surged into the sky. The reactions of the crowd varied; some
ran for their lives and others tried to smother the flames. Mass confusion and
panic was on the verge of occurring.
Suddenly, the abundant smoke took on a shade of purple and gathered together
to form the face of an old man, one no longer so powerful. The eyes of the
smoke-face searched the crowd, and singled out the stranger. The lips moved to
mouth five words. I’m trapped inside. Help me.
The boy raised the egg-timer to eye level, watching the last grains of sand
drop to the bottom.
All of a sudden, he was back in his bedroom.
A beautiful, long-haired girl was there, holding a candle above a blackened
canvas, tears streaming down her face.
"Is he gone?" she whispered.
He walked over to her, eyeing the canvas. It was - had been - one of his
paintings, a fantasy world overtaken by a tyrannical wizard. The outside edges,
with a mass of tents and people, was still intact. The castle, in the middle,
was burnt out of the canvas, leaving a empty hole.
"Yes, Princess," he replied. "Your world is safe. He is gone."
Then the spell was chanted once more, and the air around them started to
thicken...
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