The Monastery (18 ratings) by Kun Devanny
Page 1 of 1 "Truth is a dangerous weapon, one which once wielded cannot be sheathed."
At what point in a man's life does he face his greatest challenge? At birth?
At death? A surprise which leaps out at the most inconvenient moment?
These questions are the anchors to the Ekludian faith of Kintaka.
The monks in the outer courtyard contemplate whilst those in the inner
experiment. And only the newest member of the order is allowed in the inner
sanctum, where the past holds answers and the future holds questions.
A faith begun before Gods were found and at a time when morality was
circumspect,the order had a reputation normally bestowed upon whore-houses and
thieving guilds.
Once a scholar favoured the monastery with a description comparing it to a
Cesspit. That scholar was later found in a ditch without a skin, no witnesses
came forth in the inquiry which followed.)
The monastery itself sits atop a hill, the base of which is surrounded by a
natural moat, the source of which seems to reside inside the hill itself.
Further than the moat lies a small town filled with tradition and a solidity
which matches that of the bricks of the monastery. Visitors to the monastery
rarely deign to stay in the town, and it is doubtful that the townspeople would
deign for a visitor to reside there.
The gatehouse lies open, unwelcoming in its stance against intruders.
Darkness embraces its territory with an iron grip and any light from inside the
dwelling shies away from the open countryside.
Monks stride along the pebble path with a sureness gained only through years
of experience. At the front of the line comes a figure which pierces the dark.
One cannot mistake the leadership qualities of this man, with every well placed
footstep he sends some subtle signal to his followers. As the leaders left foot
approaches the ground, the solemn procession stops, and at the back of the
line, four of the monks place some containers on the ground. The leader's right
hand moves in a slow circle and the line joins itself to become a circle, at
the centre of which the gilt enveloped containers now lie.
The leader approaches the boxes and places them on top of each other. A
faint click is heard by the ring of monks and the circle seems unsure as what
to do, a triangle is drawn in the air and the apprentice monks melt away into
the darkness leaving their leader alone.
The bottom container is opened and the wind holds its breath. A faint glow
seems to emanate to the next container, and the next, until all four are
opened.
A lonely hymn reaches the walls of the monastery, silent acknowledgement of
the event is registered in the arch beside the gatehouse. Another notch is
added to the previous few.
The leader returns to the monastery alone, carrying the now white containers
in his arms. His dignified and searching look commits each scratch in the
archway to memory . It is now midnight and the silence overwhelms the land.
Another confession is over, more sins have been repented.
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