The Return by Dawn Downing
Page 1 of 1 The soldier’s boots kicked up small clouds of dust as they crunched down the
clay gravel surface of the road. Threads had long since succumbed to the stress
of friction leaving the right sole flapping with each step taken.
With a grimace, the soldier glanced toward the sun shining unmercifully
toward him, and once again wiped the sweat from his forehead with a dirty
shirtsleeve. He was almost home. He unconsciously favored his left leg as he
traveled forward. Pain brought vague recollections of the time spent recovering
in the prisoner of war camp from the injury caused by a mortar explosion.
Reaching into his pocket, he withdrew a tattered blood stained piece of paper.
Carefully unfolding the letter to keep the worn edges from disintegrating, he
read the faded handwriting, "Your daughter was born today." Most of the letter
was faded away leaving only that phrase. It did not matter though; he knew
every unreadable word by heart. The letter, vigilantly hidden from his captors,
was his only surviving possession from his past.
Familiar sights began stirring memories of another life. A life relived
moment by moment in his mind as he survived each day in the camp. Now years
later he was free. Free to return to his wife, the only reason he was still
alive after all these years. Each time he had been ready to give up, he would
retreat deep into his memory and exist there until the torture disappeared and
only the tranquil past remained.
As a well-known bend in the road appeared, he began to run. Around that bend
was the house. He was home. The journey was mercifully over.
His feet slowed first to a walk and then a dead stop. He could see the front
porch with the old swing he had sat in with his wife on long ago summer nights.
The unforgettable sound of chains creaking reached his ears. She was sitting in
the swing, beautiful, exactly as he had remembered her. She had not aged at
all. The vision was interrupted as he noticed a man beside her. As he watched
she lifted her face to the man and smiled as he kissed her. "No," he cried, and
hot pain flooded his chest. Flashes of the years in the camp came to his mind
as he fell to the ground. "I could have died years ago and avoided all the
pain", he whispered.
The woman turned when she heard him cry out and rushed to his side as he
fell. He was dead before she knelt beside him. The well-known squeak and then
bang of the screen door drew the woman’s gaze to the house and the older woman
hurrying across the grass, wiping her hands on the hem of her apron. Her mother
gasped when she saw the soldier and fell to her knees beside him. "No, not
after all those of years waiting for you to come home."
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