Going Home (5 ratings) by J. Eric Eckard
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Lorelei gazed across the lake. Fireflies dotted the sky over the water as
the last piece of the sun faded from the horizon. Tall trees with long branches
and green leaves surrounded the lake where Lorelei stood. She knew that she
shouldn’t be there - not with all the deaths lately. But the view was so
beautiful, and it had been such a long time since she had been to the lake. It
wasn’t long after the first girl turned up dead that Lorelei’s father forbade
her from going to the lake alone - especially after dark. Tonight was the first
time she had disobeyed her father. Lorelei always had longed for excitement.
Village life for her was dull. Cleaning hides. Cooking meals. Washing clothes.
Helping with the young ones. She wanted more, but certain things were expected
from young girls in her time in her village. And a life of excitement was not
among them. Lorelei was standing behind a tall oak, as if hiding from whatever
terror awaited unsuspecting girls from the village who ventured off at night by
themselves. The scenery was so serene that Lorelei had trouble believing that
anything bad could happen to her. But that’s what all the girls at the village
said. A year ago tonight, Lorelei’s best friend, Adelia, said that there was no
way that anything bad could happen to her. I’m always careful, and I never go
out at night, Lorelei remembered Adelia saying. Two days later, Adelia was
gone. They found her body a few weeks later in the middle of a dandelion field
just outside the village. Adelia was the fifth victim, and there had been five
more after her. The scenario always was the same. The girl would first vanish
for a few weeks or months and then, someone would find their bodies in a remote
spot outside the village. There would be no marks on their bodies, and no one
could figure out how they had died. It was as if their hearts just stopped. But
these were young girls, and all were very healthy before they disappeared. Many
from the village believed that the Hill People were kidnapping and killing
their daughters. But there was no evidence that any outsiders were responsible.
Some wanted to attack the Hill People, but the tribe to the north was too
strong - and with no evidence, there was little unity in this plan. The village
elders tried to maintain calm, and the men from the village began conducting
regular patrols. But it didn’t stop the vanishings. Life in Lorelei’s village
was calm before the girls started vanishing. Strock, Lorelei’s father, was an
elder in the village. His word carried much weight with the rest of the people
in the village. Strock organized many of the hunts, and he often would bring
home the largest kill from the hunt. All the food was shared, but Strock’s
prowess as a hunter allowed his family certain privileges. One of those
privileges was his place among the village leaders. And as the daughter of one
of the leaders of the village, Lorelei also held a place of prestige among the
girls in the village. Although all the girls of the village were forbidden to
venture out after dark, Lorelei had planned to use her station in the village
to convince any patrolling elders who might have spotted her that her father
had instructed her to go to the lake for fresh water. Next Page Copyright © 1999, 2000, 2001 J. Eric Eckard, sffworld.com. All rights reserved. No part of this may be reproduced or reprinted without permission in writing from the author. The author has submitted the work in accordance with and in agreement with the following Submission Guidelines.
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