The Betrayer (9 ratings) by Steve Hackwell
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"Dallan, what is this place?"
He turned to see his companion’s gaze fixed upon the chest.
"Cease! Such queries are unimportant. Come, let us open the
chest."
Jethro moved slowly to the wooden construction and threw open
its lid. Maps spilled out, carpeting the soft, lush grass with complex drawings
and elaborate diagrams. Although he had been expecting that the collection
would be impressive, Jethro was amazed by the sheer weight of maps that
engulfed him. Behind him, Dallan began to laugh hysterically.
"At last! How long have I waited for this moment? Finally I
have the maps!"

Darkness had fallen by the time Jethro and Dallan returned to
the city. The night sky was blacker than an evil soul, the stars failing to
penetrate the profuse mass of swirling cloud. Rain hammered down, drowning the
world in a torrent of stinging water.
Gradually, they made their way through the gloomy streets, the
chest strapped precariously to Jethro’s back. Buildings appeared to loom
threateningly out of the blackness, and the few people that they met refused to
speak. As Jethro turned the final corner, he could see the inn’s outline framed
ominously against the dim sky.
The door, presumably closed to defend against the driving
rain, creaked open under the force of Jethro’s booted foot. The bar was
completely dark except for a single, flickering torch that hung in its bracket
on the opposite wall. Sighing heavily, Jethro dropped the chest onto the stone
flooring with a resounding clang.
"Anybody here?"
His question went unanswered. Out of the blue, Jethro
remembered the tale that the barman had told the previous day, informing him
that nobody stayed in the inn past nightfall. Jethro snorted derogatorily.
"Damn fairy stories," he swore.
"I told you before," the murmur came from behind him, "that
myths are always based on the truth."
Jethro spun around to see Dallan leaning against the closed
door.
"What the hell is that supposed to mean?"
Dallan moved away from the door and came to stand in the
middle of the room.
"It means, my friend, that you should never disbelieve
anything until you have heard the whole story."
"Will you stop talking in damned riddles!"
The torchlight cast an iridescent glimmering over Dallan’s
face as he replied.
"Think back, my friend. What did the barman tell you?"
Suddenly, Jethro remembered.
"The house owner... the Betrayer... he killed someone."
Concentrating hard, he fought to recall the conversation. "In this inn, he
killed someone... after... after he had... found the maps." Realisation dawned
slowly on Jethro.
"That is correct, my friend. And do you remember why the
locals never stay here beyond nightfall?"
"Yeah," Jethro’s voice was barely more than a whisper,
"because they’re scared he might return."
"He? Who is he?"
"The Betrayer."
Torchlight flickered once more over the room. In the
split-second that the glow illuminated his face, Dallan smiled.
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