A heartbreaking love story (18 ratings) by Kaye Q.
Page 3 of 3 It is such a heartbreaking statement, his way of asking me if
I
still love him. And there is no denying it, the candle of my love for him still
burns bright and I know it will never fade. This is what he is waiting to hear.
I can feel the tension in the air touching my skin and I shiver. The silence
seemed to stretch forever and I am dying to tell him the truth, to finally hold
him close and have him eternally. But I hold back. It is my conscience holding
me back and I face him as I breathed out in a strangled sob:
"I’m sorry. I can’t."
The hurt look on his face is the final blow, but still his
mind
is communicating with mine, telling me:
Your know you’re the only one. I gave you my love and it’s
yours forever.
And although we didn’t touch, I felt his love pour through me
like heat from the sun. I cannot bear the sea torture we are flowing through
and
so I tell him:
Please, don’t do this. You cannot love me anymore. Don’t make
it harder for both of us . . .
He threw me one last long look and there I saw gleaming tears running down
his face. I hear his barely audible whisper then he was gone, leaving me cold
and desolate and as barren as the desert. His goodbye still echoes through my
heart.
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