Hunting Renegades (Part I) (2 ratings) by John Page
Page 7 of 7 "Are you all right?" She asked nervously.
"I'll be fine." Loc assured her as soon as he had the breath to say it.
He stumbled to his feet, but immediately hunched over in pain.
"Why didn't you do that the first time?" He asked weakly.
"I'm sorry, I just had never seen such a thing. I had to get back my
concentration."
That was true enough. Magic took a fair amount of willpower and
concentration to evoke.
Jahala, as soon as she was sure Loc would not collapse, approached the
rifle, which now lay beside the man. His eyes stared blankly ahead. Death still
upset Jahala a small amount; she was not as much of a veteran as Loc was. She
looked away from the corpse as she picked up the rifle by the long, metal
shaft.
She held it laid across her arms, staring at it with a look of confusion on
her face. "What a strange weapon?" she muttered.
Loc stumbled over to her. He, too, stared blankly at the rifle. Eventually,
Jahala simply let it drop to the ground with a dull thud.
"I cannot go much further today. Let us simply get away from these bodies."
Loc managed to gasp out.
"Oh, of course! Here, I will help you." She said hurriedly as she held out
her arm for Loc to lean on. He did so, putting most of his weight on her. They
went on for another mile before Loc could go no further. Jahala helped him lie
down on a patch of soft moss. Jahala went to gather firewood when Loc had
finally convinced her he would be all right alone for five minutes. Soon after
the fire was started, Loc fell into a deep sleep. Worrisome about Loc as she
was, Jahala stayed up the entire night watching over Loc.
End of Part I
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