A Winter Night (3 ratings) by Matt Pifher
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Snow.
The flow of soothing music filled the van. WJNP’s contemporary classical
music hour welcomed the flakes of winter as Jonathan Gaines exhaled a humble
sigh. The tires spun with icy resistance as the rusted brown mini van continued
down the highway. The Gaines family was heading up to see Margaret Gaines,
Jonathan’s withering old mother two days after Christmas and the family’s
morale was quite low. It had been three years since his last visit. Traffic was
fairly minimal in part because of the merciless weather predicted for the
weekend. This and John’s determination to hit the road before ten in the
morning. His family had spent all of the previous night packing necessities,
extra food, clothes, and personals. He was tired of driving but refused to take
a break. "We are almost there," he would reply when his son would demand that
they stop. The expressway was becoming more compact the further north they
traveled. This inconvenience met with a hard slap of frustration to the
steering wheel which disrupted his wife’s nap. She cocked her head in confused
half-awareness then surrendered back into the confines of her pleasant
dream.
John glanced at her briefly and looked up at the rear view mirror. His son,
Daniel was transfixed, and gazed out the window at the wonders that passed
rapidly by. They came upon a deer farm and the sight of the magnificent
creatures widened his eyes. A slight smile cracked his flustered face as he
continued into the gloom of winter traffic. His son was thirteen years and
extremely adamant about not going up north. Jon tried, unsuccessfully, on
several occasions to lure his motivation by offering to take him out hunting or
go fishing with his uncle Mike. This only seemed to deter his son’s interest
and he would quietly refuse the offer but ceased his complaining. Mother had
promised to take him to The Vault, a favorite bookstore of Dan’s that was about
15 miles from his house after the trip. If of course, he promised to quit his
bitching. His mother, Shelly Gaines was a sophisticated woman who was more
career orientated than his dad and unknown to most, the family bread winner.
This was uncomfortable for John who was raised with the conventional idea of
how a proper family should be raised. His father still loved her despite
her conviction at work and together, somehow, things that once seemed hopeless
in their relationship, turned out to be all right. The brake lights on the van
ahead flashed red as his dad eased on the pedal. "Son of a bitch," he cursed as
his frustration mounted yet again.
Dan sighed and continued his reading while his father cussed out the vehicle
ahead of him.. He hated leaving home and loathed his grandma and her strict,
narrow-minded perceptions on life and secretly wished that he could have found
an adequate enough reason to stay home. Then his mind began to reel backwards
and he remembered grandpa. He had given him his camera before he died and Dan
knew how much it had meant to him. His grandfather was an artist and a
affectionate, gentle man. His grandpa was a dreamer. And so was he.
Hours passed as the boy fell into a shallow slumber.
The sounds of doors opening and voices from beyond the vehicle woke him. His
door opened as he groaned. Snow flakes spat at his face as he opened his
eyelids to the anticipated nightmare. "We’re here!" bellowed his father who was
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