Emancipation (1 rating) by Jon I. Ringstad
Page 1 of 1 A slender figure moved through the forest. Though he walked with the swaying
gait and unconcerned steps of one confident of himself, he made no sound, and
his gaze never lingered. His steps made near-undetectable tracks as he stepped
on moss and leaves alike.
He was clad in grey silk, with boots of black and belt of silver. His pants
and tunic clung to his slender, muscular form so you could see the playing of
muscles. His narrow eyes were grey, as was his wavy pony-tail mane.
Long fingers on a slender hand held a bow, arrow nocked and ready. He
spotted one of his father’s favorite creatures; a falcon. His father would be
watching. Indeed, he was always watching. So the young man smiled, took aim,
and fired.
It seemed the arrow would strike true, and his smile broadened. Maybe his
father had loosened his vigilance. Joy lasted only a second. The smile was
wiped from his face as the arrow stopped in mid-air, a mere inch away from its
hapless target. It turned around with dazling speed and returned to sender. He
tried to dodge, but the arrow caught his left thigh as he landed on his bow.
Tears of anger and pain streaked his cheeks as he stood slowly and inspected
his broken weapon.
"Thank you, father," he whispered to the wind through gritted teeth.
He limped on through the forest. He dared not remove the arrow, for the
bleeding would surely subdue him swiftly. He limped on through the forest with
gritted teeth and nails cutting deeply into his palms.
As the trees thinned while he walked down towards the plains, his steps
prodiced their first sounds. Not the sound of breaking twigs or bots on rock.
Rather a squishy sound. The sound of water in ones boots; or blood. As blood
steadily trickled down his leg, it assembled in his boot. And he couldn’t be
bothered to do anything about it.
There he was; wounded, weakened, unarmed, slowed. Nevertheless, he never
worried for a second. If there was any real danger his father would intervene.
Just as he had so many times. As long as he was his father’s son, he needn’t
fear anything.
A grain of doubt appeared in the back of his mind as the blood filled his
boot and ran down onto the ground. His steps were no longer confident. They
were strained, pained, and staggering. He left a trail of blood as he struggled
though the forest, one hand around his bleeding wound and the other seeking
support in tree trunks and branches.
He stars in broad daylight when he finally collapsed leaning against the
trunk of a solitary oak. Its trunk was a deep brown, and its leaves emerald
green in the summer sun. It stood alone on the huge plain not ten feets outside
the forest. There sat the Zephyr, son of the Wind, staring out onto the plain
straining to see, or hear, any sign of bloodthirsty beasts. And for the first
time in his life he did not feel the ever-watching gaze of his father. He was
free at last. And it terrified him. He was abandoned, discarded. He was finally
on his own, without protection.
Try as he might, he couldn’t rise. He could barely raise his hands. So he
closed his eyes and waited for the carrion eaters while the sun set. The most
beautiful sunset passed as he sat there with closed eyes. Then darkness
enveloped the world and he slept.
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