A way with worlds: 40 - Communicating Your World by Steven Savage of Seventh Sanctum
Page 2 of 2 A Narrative Character is a
character whose experiences can help the reader better understand
the world. It may be someone new to a setting or someone
knowledgeable who explains things to others. In their dialogue
(or internal dialogue if it's first-person), the reader can learn
about the world as that learning is part of the story.
It can get very tempting to
insert Narrative Characters or overdo them. Don't. It then
becomes another tool, and then an obvious tool, and then your
reader realizes they're reading a story.
If you find you must use
Narrative Characters (and at times as a writer, we have to make
compromises), ask what situations occur in real life that would
be some kind of exposition/explanation. One or two of those may
do a world of good.
MY SOLUTION #3:
Visceral Elements
One of the best ways to communicate how things work in
your world is to ensure that you write elements that are very
visceral in the proper levels of details and address them
properly.
Your reader may better
understand a world if you are careful, in your writings, to
address issues anyone can understand and relate to, such as:
- Birth
- Death
- Eating
- Love and Marriage
- Sleep
- Travel
- Work/Leisure
Now these elements are
likely to pop up in your stories. These elements are also likely
to be illustrative of how your world works and how your
characters and your culture work. Showing a complicated marital
ritual (or even a memory of how one went) can show a culture is
highly organized. Characters having little to eat communicates a
harsh environment.
If you're careful, tiny
sentences, little moments, and many things that just happen to be
in your stories can communicate the world to your readers. This
is probably the most invisible way of doing things - and the way
least likely to make the reader feel lectured too.
SUMMARY:
In helping people understand your world, you may have to be
writer and worldbuilder at the same time - but there are ways to
communicate your world effectively.
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