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The Visitation (25 ratings) by Fernando Sorrentino
Page 2 of 2 But the beggar passed the old man's gate and walked on.
Stopping at Adriana Bernasconi's front door, he turned the knob and went inside.
"I'll be back in a moment," I told my students and, half out
of my mind with anxiety, I went down in the lift, dashed across the street, and
burst into Adriana's house.
"Hello!" her mother said, standing by the door as if about to
go out. "What a surprise to see you here!"
She had never looked on me in anything but a kindly way. She
embraced and kissed me, and I did not quite understand what was going on. Then
it dawned on me that Adriana had just become a mother and that they were all
beside themselves with excitement. What else could I do but shake hands with my
victorious rival?
I did not know how to put it to him, and I wondered whether it
might not be better to keep quiet. Then I hit on a compromise. Casually I said,
"As a matter of fact, I let myself in without ringing the bell because I
thought I saw a tramp come in with a big dirty bag and I was afraid he meant to
rob you."
They all gaped at me. What tramp? What bag? Robbery? They had
been in the livingroom the whole time and had no idea what I was talking about.
"I must have made a mistake," I said.
Then they invited me into the room where Adriana and her baby
were. I never know what to say on these occasions. I congratulated her, I
kissed her, I admired the baby, and I asked what they were going to name him.
Gustavo, I was told, after his father; I would have preferred Fernando but I
said nothing.
Back home I thought, That was the tramp old don Cesáreo
killed, I'm sure of it. It's not revenge he's come back for but to be reborn as
Adriana's son.
Two or three days later, however, this hypothesis struck me as
ridiculous, and I put it out of my mind.
And would have forgotten it forever had something not come up
in 1979 that brought it all back.
Having grown older and feeling less and less in control of
things, I tried to focus my attention on a book I was reading beside the
window, while letting my glance stray.
Gustavo, Adriana's son, was playing on the roof terrace of
their house. Surely, at his age, the game he was playing was rather infantile,
and I felt that the boy had inherited his father's scant intelligence and that,
had he been my son, he would certainly have found a less foolish way of amusing
himself.
He had placed a line of empty tin cans on the parapet and was
trying to knock them off by throwing stones at them from a distance of ten or
twelve feet. Of course, nearly all the pebbles were falling down into don
Cesáreo's garden next door. I could see that the old man, who wasn't there just
then, would work himself into a fit the moment he found that some of his
flowers had been damaged.
At that very instant, don Cesáreo came out into the garden. He
was, in point of fact, extremely old and he shuffled along putting one foot
very carefully in front of the other. Slowly, timidly, he made his way to the
garden gate and prepared to go down the three steps to the pavement.
At the same time, Gustavo - who couldn't see the old man - at
last managed to hit one of the tin cans, which, bouncing off two or three
ledges as it went, fell with a clatter into don Cesáreo's garden. Startled, don
Cesáreo, who was halfway down the steps, made a sudden movement, slipped head
over heels, and cracked his skull against the lowest step.
I took all this in, but the boy had not seen the old man nor
had the old man seen the boy. For some reason, at that point Gustavo left the
terrace. In a matter of seconds, a crowd of people surrounded don Cesáreo's
body; an accidental fall, obviously, had been the cause of his death.
The next day I got up very early and immediately stationed
myself at the window. In the pentagonal house, don Cesáreo's wake was in full
swing. On the pavement out in front, a small knot of people stood smoking and
talking.
A moment later, in disgust and dismay, they drew aside when a
beggar came out of Adriana Bernasconi's house, again dressed in rags, overcoat,
straw hat, and carrying a bag. He made his way through the circle of bystanders
and slowly vanished into the distance the same way he had come from twice
before.
At midday, sadly but with no surprise, I learned that
Gustavo's bed had been found empty that morning. The whole Bernasconi family
launched a forlorn search, which, to this day, they continue in obstinate hope.
I never had the courage to tell them to call it off.
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