Elements (8 ratings) by C.E. Thompson
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Elements
"Market days are always the best. Generally I hate shopping, I have always
thought it to be a girls thing. I suppose that is only natural, me being the
only male in our house. Oh, by the way my name is Kile Jackson and I live in
Stockport in a bungalow with my mum and sister, Kera, my dad left when I was
very young so I don't really remember him. Mum is doing well for herself, she
trained as a lawyer and is working for a high flying firm. Kera and I are in
are last year at secondary school (we are taking our GCSE's soon) and we are
both hoping to be accepted at Stockport college. I want to follow in mums line
of work and be a lawyer, Kera on the other hand wants to train as a primary
school teacher. Anyway as I was saying, I love haggling with the street traders
and stall holders in the market. They take more money off for me because they
know me."
"They take off more money because mum has an important position at the firm
and they might need her help one day."
"Shut up Kera! Mum tell her will you? I am trying to finish off my English
coursework."
"Kera, since you have done you can help him finish his."
"No, mum I don't want her help she will just take over. Anyway I still don?t
know what to write about."
"It's Ok, mum I'll help him we'll go upstairs and plan it."
"Why don't you write about your trip away over the summer holidays? Then you
can ask Emma and Mike to come and help you."
"Er...er no they will be busy doing homework too, I don't want to disturb
them."
"Come on, do you want my help or what?"
"Alright I am coming. Remember it is my Essay."
"I thought you said you had finished all your homework."
"I have. I am starting to write down everything that happened when we were
away. Then we can hand it in as a report to the cops or we can use it as a plan
for what we do next."
"Ok, but remember do not miss anything out. It has to be accurate!"
***
"Well I suppose it started in August on my Birthday. It was a Market day so
all four of us; me, Kera, Emma and Mike went down early morning. I wanted to do
some bargain hunting before going into the shopping precinct and Mc D's for
lunch. After half an hour of trailing round the market stalls the girls decided
they wanted to do some proper shopping. So we agreed to meet up in Mc D's at
1:30pm. Mike and I went into the music and computer games shops whilst the
girls went into the clothes, makeup and accessories shops. As it was my
birthday I treated myself to the latest NOW 50 c.d, and Harry Potter and The
Philosopher's Stone on video. Everything was normal. At least it was until I
saw something, something out of place. A lady walking around the precinct may
not have been such a strange sight to you, but it immediately caught my eye.
Not because she was wearing anything outrageously bright, but because she was
selling necklaces and chains out of a basket; just like a street trader. With
me being a big bargain and trade fan I knew that trading was not allowed to be
carried out inside the precinct. Then something made me jump. She was walking
around in and out of the crowds, but they seemed oblivious to her existence. I
thought I was loosing my marbles. The crowd seemed to walk straight through her
as if she was an open door.
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