Reality by Louise Trowern
Page 2 of 2 One day during a break at school me and my friend Anna went to the mall and
I told her "Anna I have a secrete to tell you". I was ready to tell her about
how I didn’t belong to this planet and how I had to go back. "Anna if I tell
you, you must promise me you wont tell anyone." "I wont". " I don’t belong on
this planet, I live on another place called earth. There I have lots of money
and pets. Its all different there." Anna looked at me but got distracted by
some necklaces. "Don’t tell anyone, but I need to go back." That day during an
assembly I had found there was other kids that were from earth and were rich. I
was eager to learn more about them so we could figure out how to get back. A
couple years later, I found that we were aloud to go back and leave this
god-awful place. I told Barrett "Lets go find our families." I never remembered
to say goodbye to my mother that saved my life. I figured she shouldn’t know.
Barrett and me got into the car to leave. The only was that we would get out is
if I was able to contact my family. I wasn’t able to at first, I though there
was no hope. Since Barrett lived on his own, he could go back. He told me "Just
live with me, we’ll be happy." I told him "I just want to go back." I finally
was able to contact my brother and said "Denny, oh my god, give the phone to
mom." He said back to me "dude what’s deal, why are you yelling at me now?" I
finally go the phone to my mom and cried. Before I said two words, I was back
at home. My mom didn’t know anything about me leaving, she was confused. So I
didn’t tell her, I just was so happy to be home. I never heard of Barrett
again. I couldn’t quite figure out where I could find him. "Look her eyes are
fluttering. Louise? Louise? Hello? Can you hear me?" I looked up and there was
a bright light and peoples heads hanging over me. I finally opened my eyes and
saw I was in a room sitting on a table. "Okay her vitals are stable, she’s
breathing normally, and she’s back!" I jumped up, I was confused I look around
and saw nobody I knew. " Your mom has been called, she’s on her way." I nodded
my head still confused. Sooner my mom walked in, she threw her arms around me
and said, "I’ve been waiting so long for this."
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