Comments to Soulweaver by Joyce Liao
Submitted by Ian (Dec 08, 2005)A captivating start, please tell me you are writing the rest
Submitted by Anonymous (Dec 06, 2005)Tell-tale sounds of a hammer?
Your prose is on the verge of drowning in PURPLE PROSE. Cut the adjectives and dwell more on the emotional content of your scenes.
Submitted by enanu (Dec 06, 2005)thanks for the feedback. I've actually never looked at it that way. By the way, on the verge of purple prose or is purple prose? A distinction must be made. I'll take your comment into consideration.
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