Comments to BloodWorks - chapter one by N. D. Hansen-Hill


	Science Fiction and Fantasy News SFFWorld News – 11/16/09 (11-16) SFFWorld News – 10/31/09 (10-31) MERLIN Book Signing at Forbidden Planet UK (10-22) Coming Soon TEMPEST RISING (10-09)	Official sffworld Reviews The Words of Making by David Forbes (11-16 - Book) Transitions by Iain M. Banks (11-16 - Book) The Dragon Book: Magical Tales from the Masters of Modern Fa by Jack & Gardner Dann & Dozois (11-09 - Book) Wolfbreed by S. Andrew Swann (11-02 - Book)

Site Index

Comments and Feedback

Comments to BloodWorks - chapter one by N. D. Hansen-Hill

Back to story
Submitted by Mark13 (Jan 22, 2006)

This is very well written. Your dialogue is realistic and your characters are well drawn. Honestly, I've read published fiction that was nowhere near as good. If I had to make any recommendations, I would suggest a little more visual descriptions, but this is not necessary. Best wishes, Mark13

About - Advertising - Contact us - RSS - For Authors & Publishers - Contribute / Submit - Privacy Policy - Community Login

Use of this site indicates your consent to the Terms of Use. The contents of this webpage are copyright © 1997-2008 sffworld.com. All Rights Reserved.