Comments to BloodWorks - chapter one by N. D. Hansen-Hill


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Submitted by Mark13 (Jan 22, 2006)

This is very well written. Your dialogue is realistic and your characters are well drawn. Honestly, I've read published fiction that was nowhere near as good. If I had to make any recommendations, I would suggest a little more visual descriptions, but this is not necessary. Best wishes, Mark13

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