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Submitted by Lilly (Aug 10, 2006)

“But Anchamlan knew that it is easier to fight someone who is smart but you think is stupid therefore making it obvious in your mind that you will win than it is to walk out knowing that you will die because the enemy is smarter than any that goes to war, save the elves.” I was with you right up until that sentence. What the heck are you trying to say here?

Submitted by Andrew (Mar 10, 2006)

A hearty piece, truly worth continuing. Needs to be tidied up with a few edits, some comma mistakes here and there. So far I like the complexity of the MC, looking forward to seeing more of him.

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