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Comments to Chapter 1: The Path Laid Twice by Mark M


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Submitted by anarchistbanjo (Mar 22, 2006)

This sounds like a many layered story and that is always the best kind. It also sounds like it is in the developmental stage. I had some trouble following from one scene to the next. I am curious what is going to happen next. Keep it up!


 


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