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Comments to The Thief and the Shadows: Chapter 1 by Chris McCartney


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Submitted by Cycy Smith (Jun 11, 2006)

Great story. I've really enjoyed what I've read so far. You've put just enough mystery in to make me want to read the next part (damn you! I'm supposed to be revising)but not so much that it got too confusing. Your use of language is really good too, although I did notice that you occasionally had too many subooridnate clauses to one sentence, which lost some of the impact of the ideas in them. I'm going to go read the other parts now...


 


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