Comments to The Man Upstairs by Robert Williams
Submitted by P.I. Barrington (Sep 03, 2007)The only unrealistic thing is that in this day and age, if you have a bachelor's degree in anything you can get a fairly decent job. It's when you DON'T have a BA/BS/Masters' that you cannot get a decent job. Trust me on this. Still good though. Not my favorite.
Submitted by James Smart (Jul 28, 2006)Hey Robert
just read the fantastic entiriety of "The Man Upstairs" and i can say, it was quite the read! :D
i love the punchy use of the present participle, it was refreshing, and as such, the story also had a really great natural beat and ryhthm (forgive my spelling)
ill be looking forward to reading your next work :)
James/TheSorrowsEnd
Pee>ess please check out the first part of my story, "40 days with no food and no water in the desert with the devil" any comments, critique or ratings would be really appreciated :) us writers gotta help each other out right? :P
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