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Submitted by R. Schlaack (Jan 28, 2007)

I like this story - it has Faustian implications. My only problem is that it leaves too many questions unanswered - perhaps that was your intent, but it seems a little half-finished. Perhaps you could drop some more hints as to the manner of the relationship between Behemoth, the drummer, and the talent that results."Behemoth" is certainly an intriquing character; I'd certainly like to know more about him in your stories. Brilliant use of biblical references, though. This story has a lot of potential.