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Comments to Point of View by Allen Chum


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Submitted by Bseri77 (Jul 06, 2005)

Nice poem but pay attention to your punctuation. It gives the poem integrity. Its (it's) and cease should be (ceases). Got the picture though.


Submitted by Sage (Mar 06, 2005)

i believe it is the past is history the future's a myster. today's a gift that's why they call it the present mr. chum.


 


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