Comments to The Torgaine of Ysengarth by Belinda Kelly
Submitted by J.W. Mitch (May 24, 2008)I really enjoyed your story. You write very well and the flow of your story was very smooth. With a lot of short stories, one can get a confusing mess of symbolism and preaching, but this story was clear and very amusing. Good job.
Submitted by josiah (Apr 29, 2008)surprise im a bird! i liked how you revealed that character in the opening paragraph
the "ordinary magic" was particularly refreshing
Submitted by Anonymous (Jan 19, 2008)It was good... it was not great.
Submitted by Shipei, Singapore (Dec 13, 2007)I like the story.
And the 'moral value' behind it.
Indeed, we ought to work out every problem, even if it means we do not get what we want in the end, instead of turning to evil for help to get what we want in life.
Evil will give us what we want, seemingly, and yet take away from us even more.
This is something we must all learn.
Submitted by kk (Nov 26, 2007)Interesting! A nice twist to end it as well. How about some more? Pleeze?
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