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Submitted by HellCold (May 13, 2007)

Mixed impressions, really. I don't know if I liked your story or not, but it was good. Not perfect, but good. Somehow I couldn't like the main character as I should have, but he's interesting enough to keep me reading it to the end. The "prose" was mostly good, but sometimes it was a bit distorted or pointless, which was not good for the "reading experience". I think a second chapter with more "story" will do it. I rated this one 3 (though I wanted to give it a 4) hoping the next one will be more interesting.

Can hardly wait to read more. Thanks KCstang