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Submitted by Earwen (Mar 26, 2007)

I really enjoyed your story and can envision it as a book because it captures and holds the reader's attention from the start and onwards. I love the manner in which you create the world with words; it becomes a tangible, specific image in my imagination. It also gives off a very movie-like or rpg game effect which I really love. I am also curious to know who this dark, witty stranger is. He seems very likeable