Comments to The Mark of the Dragon (Ch1) by Craig Daniels
Submitted by Lynn (Jun 30, 2007)When will you finish the other chapters? I am looking forward to finishing reading your wonder story. You have done a great job with your story.
Submitted by Grace (Jun 15, 2007)This is only your first chapter and I think I'm already hooked! You have definitely done some research on Tarot cards (Kudos and hats off to you!). I just couldn't stop reading when she started foretelling his future. Your protagonist is not your average hero (a quality that I really like about him is how human he is) so basically you have left me in the lurch, dying to discover what lies in Dhaen's future. All in all a fantastic intro to a (hopefully, and it'd better be XD) fantastic book!
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