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Submitted by James Somers (Sep 06, 2007)

Thanks for the comments...actually this version is only the short story version...The novel is much more involved and has been completed. It has story before what's found here and so much more after. I hope everyone will get the chance to find it in the book store some day! It is planned as a trilogy.

I like it. Maybe you can develop it into a series of books beginning with the development of Daniels characters and his relationship to William. Also, I think you can enhance the description of the Living World as you call it.