Comments to Charge of the Goddess (Chpt 1-2) by Nicole Thompson
Submitted by Matt McGraw (Sep 17, 2007)Nicole,
Wonderful writing... reminiscent of "Mists of Avalon" but with your own voice... well done... as always, I am available for editing/proofreading/comment
Cheers,
Matthew
Submitted by Anonymous (Sep 06, 2007)I like the story, the plot line seems to go no where. You have just barely begun to develop the characters, you cease your writing already. Tsk Tsk. This is not a proper chapter at all, let alone two.
I would need to read more if I was to give, even a rating to this tale. There is nothing here, yet.
More please.
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