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Submitted by Alexandria (May 18, 2009)

First of all, I found nothing to edit ^_^ Okay, you could have revealed a bit more into the background of the resistance and why Garrow and Hemket are being kept in the abyss (is it solely because they were part of the alliance or did they do something such as actually fight, etc). I like the fact that you did not reveal anything about the live or dead man after the break. I found it interesting though that Hemket wouldn't want the light imprinted in his mind while in the abyss. Overall: vastly enjoyed the read. Good luck!