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Submitted by Greyseagull (Oct 04, 2004)

Please tell me you're going to carry on with this world. An excellent "gripper" for the beginning of a story to say the the least(if that's what you intend to do). I was disappointed I had come to the end, wondering about this apocolyptic place. Transition from beautiful world to cold barren wasteland was effective in it's medium, yet it its too short! :) From someone (ME) who is trying to write a post-war world type of story, I can honestly say I wish I thought this idea. Great first impression, and I hope you will continue this world.