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Submitted by sillysod (May 05, 2005)

Mwa-ha-ha! This is fun. It's a very good poem, nice and bouncy and funny at the same time. You should write more poems like this. But I do have one complaint. The five-line stanzas break the rhythm a little, at least for the first few stanzas. You should either have all lines rhyming, or have a more harmonious system. But it's a very good poem. Good going. - Aditya Bidikar.