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Submitted by Lynn (Aug 05, 2007)

Great Story. I enjoyed reading the first chapter of your wonderful adventure. Will you be writing any more chapters?

Very good start - I would love to see more of it. The writing makes one feel in the story right away. I'd say keep going!

First of all I really enjoyed the style of writing. That's usually what draws me into a story. I also saw major potential for a story about clans, etc. and feel that tinkering with it and stretching it out into a novel is possible for sure. Since it was already explained this is more of a ramble and not a hammered-out story there's nothing bad to say about it at this point since I understand the need to just bang on the keyboard and see how it comes together. I say keep working with it. Meghan Sullivan