Comments to Hail to Our Infantry by Rainer Paskiewicz
Submitted by seancuig (Apr 21, 2005)Very intriguing. Descriptively wonderful.
Submitted by queenmegumi (Apr 18, 2005)I like the use of imagery. Very creative. Be aware of tense though (I used to have this problem too)! Make sure you stick with present tense or past consistantly. Other than that veryy cool!
Meghan Sullivan
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