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Submitted by joni (Jan 01, 2006)

embraceable? i don't think so. if the author wanted to change "embrace" to something else, then how about "embracing" instead? i think that would work nicely with the gerunds in the following lines. :)

Submitted by Bseri77 (Jul 06, 2005)

Nice poem. I would change embrace to embraceable (or something like in that tense).

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