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Submitted by Marc Stott (Oct 30, 2004)

Following the story into the second chapter, the pace hasn't let up, which is good. Starting to see how the character is dealing with the feeling there's no one there to help, even though there's more suffering. There is a beautiful sense of isolation here from the character, but also a refusal to give up, to keep pushing forward. Sorry I took so long to review the second chapter here, I'm wishing I had read it earlier, but keep up the great work!