Comments to Punishment by Jose Diaz
Submitted by Anonymous (Mar 01, 2005)I too, missed the point, but when I read the
comments, "wow, what a story!" Why not use Hitler's
name for his cause ? Chet
Submitted by luke1 (Jan 28, 2005)The nucleus of the thought, a stroke of genius.
Submitted by captnt (Nov 13, 2004)Wow...i was begining to think that this story was nothing more than a Teenagers dull account of a Hitler resurection but it is infact rather pleasing. The punchline at the end acctaully cracked a smile on my face. However middle section regarding the trimming of the the hitler-stache needes to be clarified a little bit. Its a bit too word-y, unlike the rest of the story which flows great. I will rate this a 4, though for its genius. It is a great plot for a short story. especially considering that it was only one page. Thank you for writting it, keep up the good work.
P.S. if you have the time, please read some of captnt's works, there are 2 uncomplete stories just read through them and write what you will. Thank you
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