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Submitted by Hopesfalltoashe (Jul 17, 2005)

This is truly amazing.I am pleasantly surprised that I have found a work of this beauty in a place like this. I have also read the other post of this writer, Heaven's Tears. The words and phrases this writer uses are just beautiful. Tyler, with your talent in discribing feelings you could make people burst into tears in empathy, without them even having to be familiar with a main character. English is my second language. It's hard for me to write things like this. If only I knew some better words to explain what I'm trying to say. To me this doesn't seme like a story. It's pure poetry. It's really a piece of art. There seems to be some connection with the two works, or am I wrong.