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Submitted by Lewis David Churchill (May 23, 2006)

I was googling my own name, Lewis Churchill and saw your poem page. I wonder how many people will think this was written by me. I agree with the first comment that your grammar needs work but good effort. Where are you from Lewis Churchill? LDC

Submitted by Anonymous (Nov 01, 2005)

You have a good idea, however, you really need some editing. Grammer & spelling go a long way to express what you are trying to say. It rambled in some places & didn't make sense, but on the whole, it has potential, keep writing.


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