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Submitted by marshallneal (Sep 29, 2005)

Hello! It took a few paragraphs, but I finally got into the story. I was tense, expecting all the time for a terrible twist to occur--which never did. That is okay; although I was a little opposed to what she was doing, by the end of the story I was so attached that I would have been upset to see her come to a bad end. Good story. --Marshall.