Victor's Adventure by Michael Vance

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The room needed light, because it was very hard to see where you are going, you might bump into things along the way. There was a little light coming for the open space over by the window. She went over to the window and opened the curtain. She went over to the curtains and opened it, and then she noticed that Victor was not in the garden at all.

Meanwhile Victor was liking were he was, because they had all sorts of weird things from, lamps, clocks and even treasure and also very strange clothing that they were . Because Victor was dressed in an odd looking fashion. The day was getting hot and everyone was dripping from head to toes in their own sweat. Victor was worried because he checked his watch and it was 9:37 and he wanted to go home and King Firebird said he must stay. That he can't leave. The King was enjoying himself and also he was a bigot. The sun was very bright and everything around him was very bright. Everyone was spraying each other with cold water, the creatures were enjoying themselves because they were drenched from head to toe from water being splashed at them. They were rolling in mud plus it was flying everywhere and they didn't care if they got hit or not. "Mud is very disgusting u can find bugs and other insects said" Victor. Mud can get in your nails, hair and even in your eyes. The creature with spiky hair explained that, "mud is good for you to relax in when you are feeling stressed from a hard days work" to Victor. Finally Victor understood what the spiky haired creature was telling him, about what mud is good for.

It was very cloudy and also wind. Everyone was heading inside. It was getting very windy, because the creatures are begin pulled in the opposite direction as the others. The wind was strong because it was blowing sand around everywhere and hitting the creatures in the faces. Meanwhile an object out of nowhere blipped, everyone wanted to know what it was. Everyone surprised because there was another strange looking creature, she was in a maids dress with blemishes all over her legs, hands and even on her face. King Firebird she was found hiding behind one of the houses, the villagers spotted her eating eating apples from the secrete apple tree in the kingdom. Victor notice her at once, it was Molly his maid. "What are you doing her creature from he world of the above" said Kind Firebird. After eating the secrete apple from the apple tree, she looked and was very scared and not able to talk because she was very scared out of her wits. Molly was beginning started down by the creatures ,they were getting closer to get a better look at her.

Molly doesn't like people or things that stare at her, because she gets very aggravated and starts throwing things. The last time she was aggravated is when she was in elementary school and she throw something at this kid and he got injured very badly. He had all kinds of blemishes all over his body and he had to go to the hospital for about a week and a half. It is not fun at all if you get hurt. "Back away from her shouted" Victor.