Paging Neil Cladingboel.

Discussion in 'Writing' started by peppermint, Dec 3, 2001.

  1. peppermint

    peppermint New Member

    Joined:
    Nov 28, 2001
    Messages:
    33
    Likes Received:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    Hi Neil

    i just wanted to thankyou again for reading Tishlyn for me.

    Cass
     
  2. Erebus

    Erebus Keeping The Equilibrium

    Joined:
    Mar 4, 2001
    Messages:
    2,015
    Likes Received:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    121
    Hi Cass,

    Welcome to the forum - I see you've submited a couple of chapters here as well, and they're awaiting processing and should appear soon.

    As you can see, I'm known as Erebus here - fancy that! [​IMG]

    Cheers,

    Neil
     
  3. peppermint

    peppermint New Member

    Joined:
    Nov 28, 2001
    Messages:
    33
    Likes Received:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    since you last had a look at it i have writen the most part of the third chapter but i think some thing is missing all the way through i don't know maybe i need to add something going on what you have read do you have any ideas (did you find something missing) or am i just worrying about nothing.

    Cass
     
  4. Erebus

    Erebus Keeping The Equilibrium

    Joined:
    Mar 4, 2001
    Messages:
    2,015
    Likes Received:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    121
    Hi Cass,

    No, I think it's going along quite nicely really. Your first two chapters are posted here now, so maybe others will give you feedback from another perspective. (Tishlyn - Book 1 of The Shadow War - for anyone interested, read it HERE!)

    Good luck with the next chapters!

    Cheers, Neil
     
  5. Alucard

    Alucard Snazzy Dancer

    Joined:
    Jul 24, 2001
    Messages:
    659
    Likes Received:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    Hey there Neil. I was just thumbing through some short stories last night while waiting for some games to finish downloading and stumbled across yours (I recognized the name). Having read it, I enjoyed it, especially the way you unfolded the plot. It was nicely done. I was just wondering, is this part of a larger story? The beginning leads me to believe so, with the explanation of the wandering souls and all.
     
  6. Erebus

    Erebus Keeping The Equilibrium

    Joined:
    Mar 4, 2001
    Messages:
    2,015
    Likes Received:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    121
    Hi Alucard, and Merry Christmas!

    Yes, Ghost of Elysium whilst starting as a few different ideas, grew into the short story you see here - which made it to the runners up list in a contest, btw - and then I expanded the character and events into the second book of my trilogy, The Erebus Equilibrium, extracts of which can also be found here, or at my web site!

    Glad you liked it! [​IMG]

    Cheers, Neil