[Maiablackwolf]

Yes, but would that not make for an adorable scene? :D

[kiaga89]

Shall I use up my character limit?:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

I honestly cannot wait to write this...you guys will have to be my betas!!!!

*jumps around with glee*

:D

[Maiablackwolf]

:D I'd love to do such a thing. Given that my Mexico trip doesn't get in the way... :o

[kiaga89]

How long shall you be away?

I just have to get by one little incy-wincy little road block with this plan and then it'll be amazing. I'm going to start writing it tonight!:D

[Maiablackwolf]

Yesssss! I can't wait to read it!

I'll be in Mexico for a week, but I might be able to get on the computer once or twice while I'm there, especially if my stepdad takes his laptop.

[PellinorFanatic]

oh oh *jumps around with a brilliant idea clapping hands* after maerad finds dernhil, while they are kissing*hopes:rolleyes:* cadvan can come in saying that he decided to come after all!!! then he can get all mad and jealous and leave!!:eek: (if you hate this idea....dont kill me..:()

[Maiablackwolf]

I think it could work, given that it was written correctly. And maybe hugging, rather than kissing, since Maerad might not want to kiss him right after she discovers him. That could be a little awkward. ;)

[PellinorFanatic]

haha but it still could work...ya know caugh tup i the moment of finding him, not realizing what she is doing....

(haha something happened today at school, and i told my friends to blame the rabbits!!:D then they hit me....:(:)

[kiaga89]

I think it could work, given that it was written correctly. And maybe hugging, rather than kissing, since Maerad might not want to kiss him right after she discovers him. That could be a little awkward. ;)

I, my friend, NEVER written incorrectly;) *insert sarcasm here*

So brief outline here:

-Dernhil coma
-Fake ashes
-Where is he going?
-Meets Maerad
-hugging/jealous/shocked Cadders

There are many, MANY questions I still have floating in my mind on this..I think the whole scene jump thing might be a bit tough, unless its started at the end in worked through flashbacks.....

[heatherlynn]

The only other option I could think of to get around the scene changes was 3 different POVs (maerad cadvan & dernhils). POVs would be intresting but alot of writing.

Just a thought to help you out on your story. I can't wait to read it!