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tooeviltoknow
April 24th, 2005, 01:36 PM
This is an old story that I wrote many years ago, and as such, some of the grammars are off. I'm thinking of rewriting it or merging it with my other story that's posted on this site, but in the mean time, wont you critique this story?

part one
http://www.sffworld.com/community/story/194p0.html
part two
http://www.sffworld.com/community/story/189p0.html
part three
http://www.sffworld.com/community/story/190p0.html
part four
http://www.sffworld.com/community/story/192p0.html