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June 1st, 2005, 07:08 AM
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Dead guy in truck is possessed by an alien who is ancient. Chase touches him and, the alien is passed on to him.
Chase doesn't find this out for some time.
He has been inhabiting people for hundreds of years.
Moving on to the next person before his current host dies.
He learns about our species by doing this.
He gives his host a certain amount of superpowers. I'd like to have his aging slow when he hit's his mid 20s.
Usually what thier imagination can come up with, without destroying it.
He learns about compassion from this boy that he possesses.
He doesn't allow this boy to tap into his new "abilities" for some time. Learning about him first.
He finds that the boy is very strong in his faith towards God and, generally wants to help people when he can.
The alien comes to love the host that he is in and, reveals himself after several years.
The boy decides to become a "superhero" with the assistance of his newfound friend.
I think I'd like to span this story over about 30 years, from Chase at 10 to late 30's.
I'd like to then skip some decades later. Chase is several hundred years old but, still looks close to 30.
He is still helping people but, as a stranger. He wonders the globe, occasionally venturing off to other planets to assist but, always coming
home.
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Chase loved exploring the caves off of Pirate's Mouth Beach. He loved to listen to the echo of the waves bouncing off the rocks outside the caves. There were about 7 caves on the side of Treasure Cliffs. He had explored three of them as far back as he could. About a hundred yards or so each. The other four were too small. He had learned that the hard way a couple years ago by getting stuck in one but, that's a story for later. Only one of them had tunnels that ran off
of them. Chase thought of them more as rooms because, they didn't go that far. One was about the size of his room. That was his favorite, "The Fun Room" is what he called it. He had even brought in a few chairs and a card table.
Jason, his best friend in the whole world, always joined him. They would pretend that they were scientists exploring a newly discovered planets cave system. With instruments in hand, a variety of wittled branches and, some boxes with gauges and dials drawn on in marker, they tested the air, rocks and, soil. They were often attacked by a variety of imaginary creatures in these expeditions. Scruff, who was Jason's huge black mastiff, would play the attacking creature. "Smartest dog in the whole world!!, Jason would often say when snuggling Scruff. Scruff was a smart dog indeed. He always seemed to know what they were playing and, what role was his.
"I love summer!" Chase exclaimed as they were headed to thier favorite cave one summer afternoon. Thier parent's had given them permission to play late so they packed themselves each a dinner to have in the caves. Jason even packed a couple sandwiches for Scruff. "Big dogs eat big." his dad would often say. "Trick" Jones, a new kid on Chase's block was tagging along today. He moved in about a month ago. Chase's parents had encouraged him to help Trick feel at home by inviting him to play all the time. A nice enough guy. He was kinda quiet so, Chase and, Jason hadn't made up thier minds about liking him or not. At least wasn't a show off or bragger.
They had a great time playing "Aliens and Explorers" and, where sitting around a small fire they had made with scrap wood washed up and, dried on the shore. "Where'd you get the name Trick?" Jason asked. Trick grinned and said "I know some magic tricks and, my big brother, Harry, gave me that nickname. I'm gonna be a famous magician someday! I've got all kidsa books on it and, even my own top hat. My rabbit, jinx, died when we moved but, my dad promised to buy me a new one. We're going to get a new one next week!" This was the most he had said to them.
"What kinda magic tricks?" Chase asked excitedly. He had seen a real live magician about a year ago and, loved the show. "Can you saw somebody in half or, run swords through them without cutting them?" That got them laughing. "No, I'm not that good, yet." Trick chuckled. "I know a few card tricks and, some of the other slight of hand tricks. I've almost got the 'Magic Rings' figured out"
"My mom's best friend's brother is a magician." said Jason. "We get to see his show whenever his show comes through town. I think he's suppose to be in town next month. I think my mom's friend can get us in and, you can meet him before the show.. no promises." Jason said proudly.
"That would be awesome!" Trick exclaimed.
From somewhere in one of the other caves came a huge crash. The boys ran outside "The Fun Room" and out to the mouth of the cave. Off to the right of the cave, about 50 yards, was a huge panel truck that had run off the cliffs and, into the water. They didn't see any smoke so, they quickly went to see if the driver needed help.
It was a mess. They didn't see how anyone could survive a wreck like this. The whole front part of the truck was smashed into the back of the cab. It didn't look like anyone could have survived this. The drivers arm was stuck out of the wreckage where the driver's window use to be. Fingers splayed out in that suprised plee for help.
The kids cautiously approached the truck. Chase, the unspoken leader of the trio lead the way. As they approached, he was overcome with a morbid curiousity an
d, reached out to the arm. When he was just a hair away, the arm grabbed him. It was like every memory in his short life hitting him at once. Then, every memory of the driver's life hitting him and, a sequence of memories of other people and, places. Times he's never seen or people he never knew.
Jeremy fishing off of The Brazas. It's a beautiful sunny day. he's sitting on an overturned paint can he got from painting the garage. Just as he's about to nod off, he gets a bite and, his bamboo rod bows with the strain of the added tension on the fishing line.
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It's a dark rainy afternoon. Kathy is on her way home in the relaxing L.A. traffic. Her day was as shitty as every. "That damn bastard Nelson! How dare he try grabbing my butt in the copy room! I'm reporting that to Hazel in HR in the morning! That son-of-a." She's pulled from her thoughts as some asshole in a Rust bucket pickup cuts her off and, almost runs her off the road. She starts yelling every name in her vast repertiore of foul language.
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This has got to be the best catch he has had in years. Dave has been coming to Lake Fort for years and, has never gone home with this many fish. He'd have to total it to about 13 sand bass and 7 croppy. He's just licking his lips at the fish fry dinner he and, Marylynn are going to have tonight. He lays out his first bass and, starts sliding his fillet knife accross, right behind the gills and, right into his pinky. "How the hell did I do that! He yells and, then puts his pinky in his mouth, which is gross because he now has fish slime and, blood on it as well.
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"I hope he likes tonight's surprise." she thought to herself. Things had been kind of bland between them and, she was hoping to spice tonight up with a romantic candlelit dinner. Her sister Monica gave her the idea of a little strip tease number when she was confiding about their lack of bedroom play. She bought the slinkiest sexiest silk teddy she could find. I've been practicing for weeks and, this should really excite him. She thought. She pulled into the garage, pul
led her shoes off on the way to the bedroom. She heard Fredrico moan and, a woman giggle.
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This was it. The day Khefu would prove to the elders and, chief that he was a man. The great black deer bear was around here somewhere. Always a problem with the horses and other livestock the tribe raised for food, it killed two girls last moon. He hurd a russling sound over the next rise. He quickly but, with amazing stealth dove behind one of the great oaks in this dense woods. He got down and crawled towards the edge of the rise on just his fingers and, toes. The rise overlooked a small ravine. On the other side was a cave. Just inside the cave he could see what looked like the back side of the biggest animal he had ever seen. "That doesn't look like any bear I have ever seen. From his point of view, the animal looked to be at least 4 spans tall. It's hair was think and gray. It looked to be covering a scaly kind of skin. He notched his arrow. It turned around in the cave entrance. What looked like a wolfs head had no hair. It hand had only two fingers and, an odd claw for a thumb on each. He pulled back the bow string. and, released.
Pop
Dead guy in truck is possessed by an alien who is ancient. Chase touches him and, the alien is passed on to him.
Chase doesn't find this out for some time.
He has been inhabiting people for hundreds of years.
Moving on to the next person before his current host dies.
He learns about our species by doing this.
He gives his host a certain amount of superpowers. I'd like to have his aging slow when he hit's his mid 20s.
Usually what thier imagination can come up with, without destroying it.
He learns about compassion from this boy that he possesses.
He doesn't allow this boy to tap into his new "abilities" for some time. Learning about him first.
He finds that the boy is very strong in his faith towards God and, generally wants to help people when he can.
The alien comes to love the host that he is in and, reveals himself after several years.
The boy decides to become a "superhero" with the assistance of his newfound friend.
I think I'd like to span this story over about 30 years, from Chase at 10 to late 30's.
I'd like to then skip some decades later. Chase is several hundred years old but, still looks close to 30.
He is still helping people but, as a stranger. He wonders the globe, occasionally venturing off to other planets to assist but, always coming
home.
__________________________________________________ _____________
Chase loved exploring the caves off of Pirate's Mouth Beach. He loved to listen to the echo of the waves bouncing off the rocks outside the caves. There were about 7 caves on the side of Treasure Cliffs. He had explored three of them as far back as he could. About a hundred yards or so each. The other four were too small. He had learned that the hard way a couple years ago by getting stuck in one but, that's a story for later. Only one of them had tunnels that ran off
of them. Chase thought of them more as rooms because, they didn't go that far. One was about the size of his room. That was his favorite, "The Fun Room" is what he called it. He had even brought in a few chairs and a card table.
Jason, his best friend in the whole world, always joined him. They would pretend that they were scientists exploring a newly discovered planets cave system. With instruments in hand, a variety of wittled branches and, some boxes with gauges and dials drawn on in marker, they tested the air, rocks and, soil. They were often attacked by a variety of imaginary creatures in these expeditions. Scruff, who was Jason's huge black mastiff, would play the attacking creature. "Smartest dog in the whole world!!, Jason would often say when snuggling Scruff. Scruff was a smart dog indeed. He always seemed to know what they were playing and, what role was his.
"I love summer!" Chase exclaimed as they were headed to thier favorite cave one summer afternoon. Thier parent's had given them permission to play late so they packed themselves each a dinner to have in the caves. Jason even packed a couple sandwiches for Scruff. "Big dogs eat big." his dad would often say. "Trick" Jones, a new kid on Chase's block was tagging along today. He moved in about a month ago. Chase's parents had encouraged him to help Trick feel at home by inviting him to play all the time. A nice enough guy. He was kinda quiet so, Chase and, Jason hadn't made up thier minds about liking him or not. At least wasn't a show off or bragger.
They had a great time playing "Aliens and Explorers" and, where sitting around a small fire they had made with scrap wood washed up and, dried on the shore. "Where'd you get the name Trick?" Jason asked. Trick grinned and said "I know some magic tricks and, my big brother, Harry, gave me that nickname. I'm gonna be a famous magician someday! I've got all kidsa books on it and, even my own top hat. My rabbit, jinx, died when we moved but, my dad promised to buy me a new one. We're going to get a new one next week!" This was the most he had said to them.
"What kinda magic tricks?" Chase asked excitedly. He had seen a real live magician about a year ago and, loved the show. "Can you saw somebody in half or, run swords through them without cutting them?" That got them laughing. "No, I'm not that good, yet." Trick chuckled. "I know a few card tricks and, some of the other slight of hand tricks. I've almost got the 'Magic Rings' figured out"
"My mom's best friend's brother is a magician." said Jason. "We get to see his show whenever his show comes through town. I think he's suppose to be in town next month. I think my mom's friend can get us in and, you can meet him before the show.. no promises." Jason said proudly.
"That would be awesome!" Trick exclaimed.
From somewhere in one of the other caves came a huge crash. The boys ran outside "The Fun Room" and out to the mouth of the cave. Off to the right of the cave, about 50 yards, was a huge panel truck that had run off the cliffs and, into the water. They didn't see any smoke so, they quickly went to see if the driver needed help.
It was a mess. They didn't see how anyone could survive a wreck like this. The whole front part of the truck was smashed into the back of the cab. It didn't look like anyone could have survived this. The drivers arm was stuck out of the wreckage where the driver's window use to be. Fingers splayed out in that suprised plee for help.
The kids cautiously approached the truck. Chase, the unspoken leader of the trio lead the way. As they approached, he was overcome with a morbid curiousity an
d, reached out to the arm. When he was just a hair away, the arm grabbed him. It was like every memory in his short life hitting him at once. Then, every memory of the driver's life hitting him and, a sequence of memories of other people and, places. Times he's never seen or people he never knew.
Jeremy fishing off of The Brazas. It's a beautiful sunny day. he's sitting on an overturned paint can he got from painting the garage. Just as he's about to nod off, he gets a bite and, his bamboo rod bows with the strain of the added tension on the fishing line.
Pop
It's a dark rainy afternoon. Kathy is on her way home in the relaxing L.A. traffic. Her day was as shitty as every. "That damn bastard Nelson! How dare he try grabbing my butt in the copy room! I'm reporting that to Hazel in HR in the morning! That son-of-a." She's pulled from her thoughts as some asshole in a Rust bucket pickup cuts her off and, almost runs her off the road. She starts yelling every name in her vast repertiore of foul language.
Pop
This has got to be the best catch he has had in years. Dave has been coming to Lake Fort for years and, has never gone home with this many fish. He'd have to total it to about 13 sand bass and 7 croppy. He's just licking his lips at the fish fry dinner he and, Marylynn are going to have tonight. He lays out his first bass and, starts sliding his fillet knife accross, right behind the gills and, right into his pinky. "How the hell did I do that! He yells and, then puts his pinky in his mouth, which is gross because he now has fish slime and, blood on it as well.
Pop
"I hope he likes tonight's surprise." she thought to herself. Things had been kind of bland between them and, she was hoping to spice tonight up with a romantic candlelit dinner. Her sister Monica gave her the idea of a little strip tease number when she was confiding about their lack of bedroom play. She bought the slinkiest sexiest silk teddy she could find. I've been practicing for weeks and, this should really excite him. She thought. She pulled into the garage, pul
led her shoes off on the way to the bedroom. She heard Fredrico moan and, a woman giggle.
Pop
This was it. The day Khefu would prove to the elders and, chief that he was a man. The great black deer bear was around here somewhere. Always a problem with the horses and other livestock the tribe raised for food, it killed two girls last moon. He hurd a russling sound over the next rise. He quickly but, with amazing stealth dove behind one of the great oaks in this dense woods. He got down and crawled towards the edge of the rise on just his fingers and, toes. The rise overlooked a small ravine. On the other side was a cave. Just inside the cave he could see what looked like the back side of the biggest animal he had ever seen. "That doesn't look like any bear I have ever seen. From his point of view, the animal looked to be at least 4 spans tall. It's hair was think and gray. It looked to be covering a scaly kind of skin. He notched his arrow. It turned around in the cave entrance. What looked like a wolfs head had no hair. It hand had only two fingers and, an odd claw for a thumb on each. He pulled back the bow string. and, released.
Pop