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The Silences of Home


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Miriamele
June 28th, 2005, 11:03 PM
I just finished The Silences of Home a few hours ago and I want to write down what I'm thinking before I forget it all!

First of all, this book is vastly different than A Telling of Stars, as Caitlin warned me it would be. In some ways, I liked this book less--in other ways, more.

Silences follows multiple POVs, unlike Telling which follows a single girl's journey. Although I liked the single POV, I liked the multiple ones too--Caitlin does both forms of writing very well. She created here some very wonderful and interesting characters, whose alternate viewpoints add richness to the story.

Also different is the prose--Silences is much less poetic and densely written. So the story moves faster--but I missed Caitlin's lyrical descriptions. Don't get me wrong, the prose here is of the highest quality, but this time I felt more connected to the characters' feelings and less able to see, hear, and feel the world in which they stood.

In all it was an enchanting book, and I admit that once I got to the halfway point, at which Luhr is attacked, I could not put it down. I have sorely neglected my housework over the past two days in order to finish it! I simply had to find out what happened!

The characters of Silences are likeable and flawed, like real people, and they act in unpredictable ways. Like Telling, Silences is quite unpredictable. (Who would have ever thought that Baldhron would end up in the position he did, for starters?) The first half of the book I kept thinking that I was reading foreshadowing of dire events, but once the main attack on Luhr occured and nothing went according to plans, I realized that nothing was going to happen like I thought. And I was right. As I read on Caitlin surprised me again and again. Sometimes the surprises were sweet, sometimes bitter. Just like real life.

The theme of written history possibly being lies was an interesting one. It was fascinating after reading Telling, and learning of the legend of Queen Gahla, to learn in this book what really had transpired during her reign. And to have the characters themselves discussing how these events were to be recorded was an interesting twist!

A few notes on the characters: (SPOILER WARNING)

Like any good antagonist, Ghala did at some points elicit sympathy from me. I understood what she was trying to do for her subjects although I found her methods deplorable. She is for the most part unlikeable, but she does have some goodness (and love for her daughter) deep in her somewhere. It's nice to see fantasy without a demonic villain, but rather someone complex and realistic like Ghala.

The one thing I could predict in this book was that the love affairs (Lanara/Nellyn, Alea/Aldron) were both doomed from the get go. In both cases the individuals were just too far apart to be able to stay together. I also suspected that Nellyn and Alea would end up together--because they both wanted to live a simple life, and because they seemed to understand each other. When Alea arrived at the Shonyn village, I was so happy! She and Nellyn deserved each other. And I thought it was adorable the way Nellyn doted on Alea's daughter, unlike Aldron who hardly looked at her.

Leish, who had such an innocent heart, suffered so much. I thought for most of the book that he would be a wholly tragic character, but like Nellyn and Alea, he did find the happiness he deserved at the end of the book and I was greatly relieved to find this.

In all I felt that every character--with the exception of Baldhron, but still things might change for him!--met a fate that they deserved. The ending was not neat and tidy, it was not all happy, but it was right.

I'm a bit sorry now, actually, that I borrowed this book from the library, because I'd like to have it on my shelf. It's the kind of book I'd read again. :)

A little note: In the book I have started writing, Caitlin, I had a little girl named Nissa too! I think now I'm going to have to change it or I'll feel like I'm copying you! :D

Miriamele
June 28th, 2005, 11:24 PM
Geeze, I'm sorry to post so much for you to read while you're on vacation, Caitlin, but after my enormous review I have a few questions for you! PLEASE feel free to wait until you get home to answer them:

1. Did you make a conscious choice to use a limited 3rd person viewpoint or did it just occur naturally? Did you find using this voice limiting? Even though I prefer to write in this voice myself, sometimes I feel tempted to jump in and describe something that the character couldn't possibly see.

2. Is there some significance that I missed to the similarity of sound between Baldhron's and Aldron's names? Or just coincidence?

3. Again, is there some symbolism to Alea's second twin that does not survive? Or is it just bad luck?

4. Did you allow this story to develop organically as with Telling, or did you know where it would end when you began?

Thank you!

Because I can't quite shut up, I have one more quick comment too: :o

I don't know if it's because you're a doula or because you've had children yourself, but your descriptions of Alea's pregnancy and birth were wonderful! Especially her Telling at the time of Alnissa's birth--it was beautiful and real. So few writers write about birth realistically, or about caring for a baby for that matter. Because they're afraid of turning off male readers perhaps? Anyhow I enjoyed Alea's parts of the story very much. I would have to say she was my favourite character, and the one I related to the most.

Have a great vacation, Caitlin! :)

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Caitlin
July 1st, 2005, 07:15 PM
Geeze, I'm sorry to post so much for you to read while you're on vacation, Caitlin, but after my enormous review I have a few questions for you! PLEASE feel free to wait until you get home to answer them.
How could I wait? ;) While I must definitely respond to your review, I'll answer your questions first, since I may not have time for everything...

1. Did you make a conscious choice to use a limited 3rd person viewpoint or did it just occur naturally? Did you find using this voice limiting? Even though I prefer to write in this voice myself, sometimes I feel tempted to jump in and describe something that the character couldn't possibly see.
The viewpoint(s) occurred naturally. I figured out very early in the writing of the book that I'd need multiple p.o.v.'s, in order to show up the characters' different interpretations of events/experiences, and their misconceptions. It felt great. After the very intense, very interior single voice of Telling, I actually felt quite freed, using all the 3rd person perspectives.

2. Is there some significance that I missed to the similarity of sound between Baldhron's and Aldron's names? Or just coincidence?
Just coincidence! I often find, in retrospect, that several of my names have the same sounds to them - which is fine for the Alilan, and perhaps just sloppy for the rest. I guess I have certain sounds in my head that subconsciously work themselves in to the naming process. Though now that I think of it, the Aldron/Baldhron similarity has a lot of potential for analysis! Aldron's a Teller who fabricates stories that become real; Baldron is a scribe who sets down real stories amongst the fabricated ones. So they represent two ends of a narrative spectrum.

This is the beauty of text. Readers can discover themes and symbols that the author didn't deliberately craft!

3. Again, is there some symbolism to Alea's second twin that does not survive? Or is it just bad luck?
I wanted to create a scenario that would be particularly devastating for Alea. In her culture, twins are revered because of the model of the divine twins the Alilan worship; having one of her twins die would be a dire omen, to Alea.

A little note: my description of Alea's birth experience came from an article in one of my doula magazines, in which a doula described attending the birth of twins, one alive, one apparently long dead. I was deeply affected by the piece; not surprisingly, it worked its way into the book.

4. Did you allow this story to develop organically as with Telling, or did you know where it would end when you began?
I didn't know where it would end, no, but I did know in far more detail how I'd get there. To an extent, the framework of the story was already in place, thanks to it being a prequel. I plotted it out loosely before I started writing (lots of charts and notebooks), filled it in considerably as I wrote each chapter - but this only extended to about the first 3/4 of the book. When I hit book 4 (I think; it's been over a year since I looked at it!) I had very little idea what would happen. Planning and then writing the events of the last part of the book was totally dizzying and wonderful. I had no idea that Lanara would make the choice she did; in the first draft I killed Baldhron off in book 1, so I had to resurrect him and change the beginning. It seemed like the perfect situation: having a basic plan, but developing it and changing it as I wrote. Maybe this is how most authors wrote; I assume my "organic" experience of Telling's writing was more anomalous.

I don't know if it's because you're a doula or because you've had children yourself, but your descriptions of Alea's pregnancy and birth were wonderful! Especially her Telling at the time of Alnissa's birth--it was beautiful and real. So few writers write about birth realistically, or about caring for a baby for that matter. Because they're afraid of turning off male readers perhaps? Anyhow I enjoyed Alea's parts of the story very much. I would have to say she was my favourite character, and the one I related to the most.
This is wonderful to hear. For years (and definitely since I had my own children), I've been frustrated by the lack of accurate representations of labour and birth in literature, movies, television shows (i.e. one contraction, an "oh, it's time!!", a few scream-accompanied pushes, and pop! a baby). I really, really needed to write a birth that reflected my own experiences and those of the women whose labours I've attended. I'm so glad that you appreciated and related to that part of my story! (And I, too, love Alea. You know, for the longest time I thought Lanara and Nellyn were going to have a last-minute reunion and a ride into the sunset - but when I got to that 3/4 mark, I knew that couldn't happen. Alea really, really deserved Nellyn.)

Have a great vacation, Caitlin! :)
Thanks so much! It's been great, crazy, tiring so far - but it's only just begun...

Do I have time to respond to your other posts, I wonder? :)

Miriamele
July 1st, 2005, 09:48 PM
Wow, thanks for taking the time to respond to my questions Caitlin! :)

I'm not going to say much more for now, except for one more comment which I forgot to add the other day: "The Silences of Home" is a wonderful, brilliant, perfect title for the book. Every character suffered some type of silence upon returning, or trying to return, home. I love it when an author can come up with a title that not only holds meaning from the book but holds meaning on several levels. Great stuff!

Anyway, I hope you enjoy the rest of your vacation--make sure you find time to relax, and don't spend TOO much time on your husband's laptop! :D

Caitlin
July 4th, 2005, 01:27 PM
A little note: In the book I have started writing, Caitlin, I had a little girl named Nissa too! I think now I'm going to have to change it or I'll feel like I'm copying you! :D
Such a coincidence!
I'd been writing about Jaele for years before I realized how close the name was to Guy Kay's Jaelle (I told him about this when we met for the first time; I felt I had to let him know that I really, truly had come up with the name on my own, and that any resemblance to his character's name was due only to subliminal factors!). I actually did try to change Jaele's name, after this realization, but couldn't. As I'm sure you won't be able to change your Nissa, now that she's probably inhabiting her name very comfortably.

Anyway, my character's full name was Alnissa. So they're really entirely different, aren't they? ;)

KatG
February 17th, 2006, 04:16 PM
Guess what I just bought? Ha, ha, soon I will learn all the secrets of the war.

Caitlin
February 17th, 2006, 06:32 PM
Guess what I just bought? Ha, ha, soon I will learn all the secrets of the war. :) :) :)
Excellent. You'll have to do another mini-interview with me when you're done...or at least post some of your (always articulate) reactions and comments here!

KatG
March 8th, 2006, 07:11 PM
SOH just arrived, along with Alison's "The Gift." Now I'm all set, but I have to finish Kevin Radthorne's "The Sands of Sabakushi, Part 2" first. Oh what an embarassment of fantasy riches!

I will say that both books are quite hefty. How many words did the sucker end up being?

Caitlin
March 8th, 2006, 08:48 PM
SOH just arrived, along with Alison's "The Gift." Now I'm all set, but I have to finish Kevin Radthorne's "The Sands of Sabakushi, Part 2" first. Oh what an embarassment of fantasy riches! And by forum authors, all. Thanks again, KatG, for your support and advocacy!

I will say that both books are quite hefty. How many words did the sucker end up being? Um...about 185,000 words, I think. My first book was a comparatively svelte 110,000 words.

alison
March 9th, 2006, 02:50 AM
Thanks indeed, KatG! It makes me look rather guiltily at my pile of unread books, which has been stealthily growing the past six months...I've been having real trouble getting time to read novels lately. I do hope you enjoy The Gift, but you must know that your opinion is welcome, positive or negative.

 

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