Critique: Story developed, seeking feedback

[navyseel]

Hi all,

I have been working on a writing project for some three to four years now and feel that it is finally beginning to reach maturity and a level I am happy with. I would love to share it with you and get your feedback as I come closer and closer to publishing, but am not sure of the best way to do this.

I have the prologue and four chapters uploaded to my own area of SFF world under the stories section, can you view them from there or do I have to make them somehow available?

If anyone would like to read them, please let me know and I appreciate all feedback of any description.

Cheers!
James

[Taysir]

I'll read 'em.

For starters, post the prologue.

[navyseel]

Ream or read? :)

Is there a formal way to 'post' them and give you the link or should I just paste them into the forum thread here as plain text?

[Taysir]

Read :o


I'm not sure but I've seen others just paste their stories.

[navyseel]

Ok I initially posted the prologue here but have figured out how to publish it through the stories section so here is the link to the prologue instead

http://www.sffworld.com/community/story/719p0.html

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