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Leo
August 1st, 2005, 11:06 AM
hi folks i have recently posted a new story chapter two of tierra nova. It has lots of action but i am not done it yet. But i would love it if you guys could critque it tell me if i need to slow down do some counter measures. please and thank you :)

TheEarCollector
August 1st, 2005, 01:34 PM
Could you post the link maybe? Thanks

Ouroboros
August 1st, 2005, 01:51 PM
There's an old video game and SF novel by David Drake and Ben Ohlander called 'Terra Nova'.

No connection, I take it?

Leo
August 1st, 2005, 07:42 PM
There's an old video game and SF novel by David Drake and Ben Ohlander called 'Terra Nova'.

No connection, I take it?

sorrry i dont think so, this is a fresh idea.

but here is a the link just os you guys can take a lookhttp://www.sffworld.com/community/story/712p0.html (http://http://www.sffworld.com/community/story/712p0.html)