[Monty Mike]

Poems never interested me much, but today I decided to sit down and write one. Here it is:

Purple Purpose (http://www.sffworld.com/community/poem/589.html)

Any comments are welcome :)

[Evil Agent]

Pretty cool.. some nice rhymes there. I fooled around with some poetry in my later teen years, and early twenties, but I've given up recently. I prefer writing stories, since poetry is just so... well, vague! :)

But that wasn't bad at all, especially for a first poem.

[Monty Mike]

I'm in a Poem mood lately :D Let me know what you think:

God's Blood Brother (http://www.sffworld.com/community/poem/600.html)

Thanks :)

[St. Rapier]

Interesting, a solid poem. Who is this God's Blood Brother, an angel or god or something?

I also have a poem on the site if you (or anyone else) wouldn't mind taking a look.

I Promis You Treats (http://www.sffworld.com/community/poem/534.html)

Would it be better as a short story?

BTW: i liked Purple Purpose too.

[Monty Mike]

I also have a poem on the site if you (or anyone else) wouldn't mind taking a look.

I Promis You Treats (http://www.sffworld.com/community/poem/534.html)
What a fantastic poem! And one that deffinately should remain a poem :D

I left you a comment on the actual page ;)

[St. Rapier]

Thanks! I love that game (BGll), it's a classic.

"Live by the sword...Live a good loooooooong time!"

.....just one of many gems

[JamesL]

"Go for the eyes, Boo! GO FOR THE EYES!"

Another classic. ;)

[Monty Mike]

Just to say - I've now finished
God's Blood Brother (http://www.sffworld.com/community/poem/600.html) . It has four verses :)

[Tari]

i dont usually enjoy reading poetry with rhyme but you had me sucked in, so to speak. Rhyme if not used properly can sound cheesy but you use dit well there. i enjoyed Purple Purpose

~ Tari